Wednesday, September 26, 2007
Within my research for this semester I have came across many nonessential "necessaries" women obsess over . The majority of women are fixated from childhood on finding prince charming, and as a result they try to mimic the models they are exposed to who draws attention from men. With my design of a machine, i want to expose a young girl to the customs women perform in our culture. The machine will be the child's teddy bear, whom she comes to for support. The girl will be placed inside the machine, endure the practices of women, and as a result be transformed into a different depiction.
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For your assignment 2 project, I think you've done a good job in refining the last scene with zoom the "Playboy's" ear and fading in the chocolate rabbit with the photo of mouth in the background.
I think you need to refine your keyframing a bit. It looks like you have some unneccesary keyframes that are causing wierd issues like stuff moving randomly ect. Its easy to overlap keyframes if you dont change the view scaling. This is probably whats causing it.
I think you have a lot more synergy going on between the related objects. particularly the rabbit and the girls ear. The scene with the chickens, chicks, and eggs has a few minor glitches that make it sort of jumpy. The pink fade in at the beginning is a good idea.
- Where is the steak? Still a chicken wing emerges from the cow's rump. Hmmm.. Secondly, the key framing on the leg section is still quite bumpy. You will want to go in and review your Position Keyframes in order to fix that.
- Also, the ending is a little more realized. Sadly, you put too much attention on the bite in the ear. Not a good direction to take, as the subtly of it the first time had more power.
- Finally, the rabbit has still not properly emerged onto the scene. if you're going to have a mouth, be sure to have a little more animation which includes the bunny actually hopping into the mouth, and the mouth closing around it. That would be a more striking conclusion.
The bunny transition is great. I wondered why the cow stopped turning around in the beginning, but it still works. The mouth is extremely effective in the last shot.
Once the pink goes away and the cow printed screen appears..we still see a bit of pink on the left side of screen. Maybe another transition for the egg/playboy bunny. The mouth at the end is very dramatic for me,,I like it. Overall look is great!
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