Wednesday, November 28, 2007

final project

comments on first critique on final project.

3 comments:

Ella said...

I like where you're going with your final project. I particularly find the "underpants" graphic to be very interesting. Feels like it can be speed up a bit?

Tiffani Nikole said...

Great Job!! However, when the yellow panties appear there seems to be one missing beside the center thong. But very interesting COMPOSITION!!!!!! YIPPY. you should be a surface designer for undies

JustinIsWanderingWondering said...

I like the general direction, and the concept, but I think you need to work on really smoothing out those keyframes. Everything seems to either jerk or pop. Try changing the velocity a bit, youll be suprised how easy it is once you understand the basic concept (at first glance its really intimidating)Also play around with keyframing mask changes to create smoother animations (for instance the woman couldve been cleaned up quite a bit with a couple masks here and there)

For some reason, Im not sure why, I REALLY like that doctor's office background. Its interesting without being completely distracting.